Image[]
The other image was a bit dark, so I redid the image at mostly the same angle (larger dimensions). Hope you don't mind. --Superlgn 01:41, 7 August 2009 (UTC)
- No, not at all. I wasn't happy with the old image either and the new image looks great. :) ~~ Songlian 07:49, 7 August 2009 (UTC)
Spoilers part[]
It looks to me that the text considered as spoiler is too big. May be we should only put the second paragraph about everybody being dead under paragraph spoiler? Any thoughts? ChernyjDyr 08:42, 9 August 2009 (UTC)
- It's a bit wordy.. Much of the spoilers aren't spoilers to the main quest or anything, maybe just to localized events. I've never actually explored that area myself and don't remember Rizzen's conversation about it. But I think there's some guards or a sign out front to keep people out right? So, it's not necessarily something the Princess learns about first hand. Maybe something with some spoilers shifted up to the top, like:
The Duergar Mine is an outpost located in the Underdark Tunnels, South of Maeralssin. It is run by Grey Dwarves and produces adamantite. The mine has recently suffered a few deaths and partial collapse at the hands of an out of control Iron Golem.
| Spoiler: The Princess can explore the Duergar Mine on the route between Maeralssin and the South Tunnels, as she is heading towards Rual'Thor's Home in search for her equipment and possibly her companions. |
--Superlgn 15:07, 9 August 2009 (UTC)
- There are no guards at the entry, only a warning sign, but it is not readable. The only one who warns the Princess about going into the mine is Rizzen, who also partly prohibits it...but then changes his mind because of the Princess' arguments. Which are either a)she wants to explore it or b)she wants to trade with the dwarves. And on the basis of this I put the (new) Spoiler. I think it is more likely that the user will be surprised to find out there is no one left to trade with. I believe that after reaching this point, the fact that the mine is found on route to Rual'Thor's Home is not a surprise at all and it is less likely that the user will search for "Duergar Mine" without already knowing of Rual'Thor. ~~ Songlian 17:25, 9 August 2009 (UTC)
- Ok, in that case it makes sense. The only thing I'd suggest is that ", as she is heading towards Rual'Thor's Home in search for her equipment and possibly her companions." go into the spoilers somewhere, like: "The Princess comes across the mine as she is making her way with Rizzen towards Rual'Thor's Home in search for her equipment and possibly her companions. As she goes deeper into the site..." --Superlgn 17:45, 9 August 2009 (UTC)
Huge Iron Golem link[]
Should the link for the Huge Iron Golem go to Golem or is it worthy of a special character page? --Superlgn 18:42, 23 August 2009 (UTC)
- Methinks special character page. ~~ Songlian 18:43, 23 August 2009 (UTC)
- Alright. I was just going over the Special:WantedPages and saw it along with a Bone Golem link (that I fixed). --Superlgn 19:01, 23 August 2009 (UTC)